Five options, each a different layout. Pick one number and use that option's banner, headline and Featured tile together. Every option sends people to your Commercial Property 5-Number Check spreadsheet with the keyword “FIVE”, the same one you used on 25 August. Each banner is shown at real phone size too, so you can see it reads.
I buy commercial property for SMSF trustees and investors | Central Coast & Hunter | 12 commercial properties settled, 8 inside an SMSF | Founder, Bow Tie Buyers Agency | DM "FIVE"
This is the real size on a phone. Every word is readable.
Commercial buyers agent, 20 years reading retail data | Ex-Nielsen & IRI | Walmart, Costco, Woolworths | 12 settled, 8 in super | Central Coast & Hunter | DM "FIVE"
This is the real size on a phone. Every word is readable.
Same $1m buys 304 sqm of shed in Newcastle, 232 in Sydney | Commercial buyers agent, Central Coast & Hunter | 12 settled, 8 inside an SMSF | Bow Tie Buyers Agency | DM "FIVE"
This is the real size on a phone. Every word is readable.
I check every commercial deal in five numbers, in 10 minutes | Commercial buyers agent for investors & SMSF trustees | 12 settled, 8 in super | Bow Tie Buyers Agency | DM "FIVE"
This is the real size on a phone. Every word is readable.
Own a couple of rentals and the yields stopped moving? | I help you buy your first commercial property on the Central Coast & in the Hunter | 12 settled, 8 in super | DM "FIVE"
This is the real size on a phone. Every word is readable.
Send it to anyone who likes or comments on your posts, or who's just connected. Swap the highlighted bits for each person.
Hey [FIRST NAME], I'm about to head out the door to grab my youngest from [ACTIVITY], so I wanted to send this quickly before I forget.
I saw you [liked / commented on] my post about [TOPIC] (or: thanks for connecting!).
I'm Tim, and I run Bow Tie Buyers Agency. I buy commercial property on the Central Coast and in the Hunter for people who already own a rental or two. A lot of them buy inside their super fund.
Your profile reminded me of [CLIENT NAME], who I was just on the phone with.
[He/She] [RESULT].
It works because I read the lease, not the brochure. Every deal goes through the same five numbers. If the cash on cash return comes in under 8%, we walk.
I spent 20 years reading retail sales data for the likes of Woolworths and Costco. I've now settled 12 commercial properties, 8 of them inside an SMSF.
Right now I've got an offer where [THE OFFER].
As you can imagine, the hotspot report isn't a big fan of me haha.
Anyway, I really have to go or [he'll/she'll] be waiting out the front.
Happy to walk you through how it works. I've got [TIME 1] or [TIME 2] free tomorrow?
If not, no biggie at all. I can just send you my 5-Number Check spreadsheet instead.
Nice to meet you!
Cheers,
Tim